pebble in war

I am cold with a strong breezes coming in from the right im all alone looking in to the beautiful night sky talking to my self saying that "I hope something interesting happens tomorrow" and then I closed my eyes and went to sleep.

I woke up feeling warmth as the sun rises. I hear a loud scary noise coming from the ocean, I look to the sea and there are massive giant creatures in the sea heading towards me. I was frightened was it going to eat me, is it going to hurt me, will it sit on me, wait im just a pebble it won't bother me.

 

When the ships arrive people with long big fancy sticks start disembarking like a stampede of giants running to the hills up ahead !Ow! One stood on me, man did that give me a fright at least it didn't hurt because I'm solid. 

As the humans run to the hills they get flanked, caught off guard. They get sniped at from the hills and someone gets hit "man down man down!" I hear someone scream, a man falls to the ground and another man picks him up and retreats and gets him to safety. 

They went right past me as he was dragged to a safe place. From the injured man red water dropped on me and the night started falling, loud banging went on all night I was scared and alone.

nice job you did really good at describing what happens.